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PostSubject: Closer [17+] Syn Gates   Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:32 pm

“...and I’m going to be taking Jayden, so you don’t have to worry about her. The laundry...” I zoned in and out, barely listening, much less comprehending what she was saying. All I could think about was the fact that I wasn’t supposed to work today. But she just had to call me and beg me to come and clean her house, since she can’t do it herself. I could be sleeping right now. It’s nine o’fucking clock in the morning and it’s Friday. I haven’t been up this early on a Friday since I was in highschool.

“Ali!” fingers snapped in front of my face, making me jump. “Are you even listening to me?”

“Huh- what?” I asked, making it painfully obvious that I had no idea what she said.

“Argh!” she groaned, grabbing her bag off the floor and taking her daughters hand. “I don’t have time for this. I’m supposed to meet my friend in ten minutes. Just- do what you normally do.” she shrugged, retrieving the keys to her red Mercedes off the granite counter top. “I’ll be back in a few hours.” she smiled, then walked out the front door. Moments later, I heard her car start and drive off, leaving me to do one of the things I do best, clean.

“Sleep with one eye open
Gripping your pillow tight

Exit light
Enter night
Take my hand
We’re off to never never land.”

I sang along to Enter Sandman as I cleaned the very large house. It’s what I always did; I put on my music really loud and went at it. Music helped me clean, it seemed like. I skipped into the hallway and retrieved the Swiffer out of the closet. Dancing around and head banging as I went, I Swiffered the floor, not paying attention to much else.

The song had changed to I Almost Told You That I Loved You, which happened to be my favorite song at the moment, and I really started to get into it. So it was only right that I didn’t hear the door open.

“I almost told you that I loved you
Thank god I didn’t ‘cause it would have been a lie
I say the damnedest things, when you’re on top of me
I almost told you that I loved you.

I hate to say it but it has to be said,
You look so fragile as I fuck with your head
I know it shouldn’t but it’s getting me off
If sex is the drug, then what is the cost?”

“Who are you?”

I screamed bloody murder, dropping the Swiffer and clutching my chest as a fairly large man suddenly appeared in front of me. My face heated up, I was throroughly embarrassed that I had just been caught dancing and singing loudly, since I can do neither one of them very well, but what made it worse, this guy was...well, he was just daymn! I don’t even think hot was the word for him.

“Um, hello?” he waved his hand in front of my face.

“Huh?” I squeaked, snapping out of my daze.

“Who are you?” he repeated, seemingly slower this time.

“Ali?” I questioned, sounding like I had no idea if that was my name or not.

The guy laughed deeply. “You sound and look like you don’t really know if that’s your name.”

“It- it is.” I spit out quickly, feeling extremely uncomfortable under the presence of such a good-looking guy.

He nodded. “Well then, Ali, my name’s Matt.” he stuck out his large hand for me to shake. I looked at it for a brief moment, then attempted to shake his hand with my abnormally small one. “May I ask why you’re in my house, shaking your ass, singing and cleaning?” a smirk twitched the corner of his plump lips.

“Your house?” I frowned, repeating it slowly.

He nodded. “Yeah, I live here.”

“I wasn’t aware that Jordan had a boyfriend.”

“Husband, actually.”

I tilted my head to the side and scanned over his face. “You do look a lot like Jayden.”

Matt laughed again, sending a shiver down my spine. “I’ve been told that a few times.”

I nodded. “Yeah. Oh, I’m here because I clean your house.” I then cleared my throat. “And I was dancing and singing because that’s what I usually do when no one’s here with me.” I blushed profusely, still embarrassed that I had been caught like that.

Matt nodded, now grinning at me. “There’s no need to be embarrassed. It’s not like you have a shitty voice or can’t dance. It was pretty entertaining to watch, actually.” the smirk was back and I noticed he took another step toward me.

“Shadz! You forgot your- oh? Who’s this?” my head snapped to the left, where possibly the most gorgeous man I have ever seen stood holding a black hoodie and wearing a smirk that rivaled Matt’s. I had to clamp my teeth together to keep my jaw from dropping and tell myself to breathe so I wouldn’t pass out. Don’t get me wrong, Matt was hot, but this guy, oh my god. I was having a very hard time keeping my mind from straying to things that would make the most perverted of people blush. I wanted to throw the man down and rape him and I can honestly say that I have never said, nor thought about doing that to someone ever before. Taking in his whole appearance, I held back a moan and fought the urge to lick my lips. The muscles, the tattoos, those dark eyes, the strong jaw and high cheekbones. Hello, sexy.

Forget everyone else, I don’t even know this guys name, but I want him. I want him bad. And from the look on his face, he knows.

“This is Ali.” Matt spoke, breaking me from my trance. “Apparently Jordan hired her to clean my house and didn’t tell me.”

The guy nodded, walking closer. He threw the hoodie at Matt, without breaking his gaze with me. “Brian,” he smirked, making my heart pound against my rib cage, and stuck out his hand like Matt had. I grinned and shook it, loving the tingle I got when his skin touched mine. As if the smirk hadn’t made my heart go wild, I felt like I was going to pass out when he brought my hand up to his lips and kissed my knuckles.

I heard Matt snort and saw him walk out, from the corner of my eye. “Nice to meet you.” I matched his smirk.

“Likewise.” he leaned in closer to me. “So, you clean houses?”

I giggled and nodded. “Yeah, but just until I get done with school.”

Brian’s eyebrow quirked up. “How old are you?”

“Twenty four. I went to college late.” I shrugged. “How old are you?”

“Twenty seven, but I like my girls younger than me.” he smirked once more, his lips inches from my own. “Even if it is just temporary, would you mind stopping over at my place once in a while? I’m a very dirty boy.”

I bit down hard on my lip, getting exactly what he meant. “I think I can handle it.”

“Ugh, there’s sand on my towel!” I whined, standing up. Katelyn, who was laying in the sand next to me, snickered and rolled onto her stomach. I grabbed the edge of my towel and shook it, getting all the sand off.

“AH! You got sand on me!” Katelyn screamed, jumping up and brushing herself off.

“Sorry.” I giggled, continuing to shake my towel.

“I wanna fuck you like an animal
I wanna feel you from the inside
I wanna fuck you like an animal
My whole existence is flawed
You get me closer to god.”

I dropped my towel in shock. I never expected to hear that ringtone, ever. Katelyn stopped brushing the sand off her legs and stared at me in question. “Who’s calling you?” she asked, looking from me to my phone. I didn’t answer, just kept staring at my phone, thinking I was dreaming because I never have that kind of luck. Katelyn huffed and walked over to my phone, picking it up. “Who’s Brian?”

“Gimme it.” I held out my hand and she placed the phone in my palm. Checking the screen one last time, I smiled and answered it. “Hello?”

“Hey,” Brian’s smooth voice floated into my ear, making my stomach do flips. “What are you doing?”

“Um, nothing. I’m at the beach with a friend. What about you?”

“Oh,” he said, sounding caught off guard, “if you’re busy I can call back -”

“No! I’m not!” I spoke quickly. “What’s up?”

He laughed deeply. “Well, since you’re not busy, I was wondering if maybe you wanted to stop by my place.”

A felt a large smile spread across my face and Katelyn raised both eyebrows, a smirk on her face. I bit down on my bottom lip. “I suppose I could for a little while.”

“Awesome,” Brian chuckled and proceeded to tell me his address.

When I hung up, I squealed loudly. “What’s going on?” Katelyn asked.

“I have a job to do.” I smiled, collecting my stuff.

“Wait, you’re never excited about work. Why are you excited and all happy?”

I shrugged. “Guess this time it’s just different.” I slipped on my flip flops.

She laughed loudly. “Oh my god, you are such a little whore!” she slapped my arm playfully.

“What?” I asked innocently, a coy smile on my face.

“How hot is he?”

“The hottest guy I have ever seen.” I moaned, biting down on my lip again.


“Seriously.” I giggled, running to my car. “I’ll call you later!”

“You better!” Katelyn called after me, laughing and shaking her head as I hurried unlocked my car and practically threw myself in.

Twenty minutes later, I was standing in front of a very large house, with my heart in my throat. I had an idea of what was about to happen, but I wasn’t sure if I was ready for it.

“Hey,” Brian grinned at me as he opened the door. “Damn,” he smirked down at my outfit, a purple tube top and short shorts “do you always wear stuff like that when you clean?” his hand pressed into my lower back as he guided me into his spotless house.

I shrugged. “Sometimes, only for the special ones.”

“Mmm, I must be a ‘special one’ then, huh?” his hands placed themselves on my hips and he drew me closer to his body.

“What do you think?” I grinned slyly, letting my hands play across his chest.

Brian smirked, leaning in toward my face. “I think you look amazing in that color. How’d you know?”

“Know what?” I breathed, my heart racing as he got closer.

“Purple’s my favorite color.” he nipped at my bottom lip.

I quirked an eyebrow, my hands now buried in his short, spiky hair. “Mine too.”

“Hmm,” Brian’s lips brushed mine ever so slightly, “yet another thing that makes me like you even more than I already do.” his lips crashed into mine, making me gasp. His tongue pushed past my lips and massaged my own. I moaned, pulling him closer to me by his hair. He tasted so good, better than I ever imagined. His hands trailed down south, where he gripped my ass and he picked me up, making my heels fall from my feet. I was slammed into a wall as I pulled at Brian’s tight, black shirt, desperately wanting it off. My wish was granted when he broke out of the kiss to strip it off. I grinned, running my hands down his sculpted chest, loving that goosebumps rose on his tanned skin. His lips attached to mine once more and I felt myself being lifted.

I’m thinking that it might be bad to be doing this right now, since I barely know him, but I really don’t care. He’s too damn sexy to pass up.

My mind was swirling. Soon our clothes faded away and it was nothing but skin-on-skin contact. My fingertips dug into the soft, but firm skin of Brian’s back as his lips left a trail of wet kisses down my neck. I moaned, lifting my hips to meet his. He took a firm grip on my hips and pushed himself to a hilt inside me. Throwing my head back into the bed that we were now on, I screamed in pure pleasure. “Oh, fuck...”

Brian smirked, pulling out and slamming back into me. I groaned and drug my nails down his back, bucking my hips up. Over and over again he did it, until I was screaming his name so loud I thought the windows would shatter.

Finally setting a firm pace, Brian pinned my hands above my head. He went back to sucking on my neck as his hips crashed violently into mine.

“Harder!” I shrieked, loving how rough he was being with me.

Brian unpinned my hands and flipped us over, setting me on top, straddling his narrow hips. His large hands slid up my body, stopping right under my breasts. His calloused thumbs teased my nipples as I rode him as hard and as fast as I could. Brian thrust up as I came down, making him go deep inside. His name started to sound like a chant, I was calling it so much. It was inevitable, he was just too damn good. I don’t think I could have been quiet if I wanted to.

Brian flipped us over once more. I buried my face into his neck as he fucked me with all he had. I couldn’t see straight; when I opened my eyes, all was blurry. I couldn’t really hear right anymore either, but I know that he and I were even louder than before, and the headboard had probably made two large dents in the wall from how hard and fast it was pounding into the plaster.

My whole body shuddered as I came hard around Brian, his name belting hoarsely from my throat. He was right along with me, his nails digging into my thighs as he growled my name. Brian made it sound so sexy; no one’s ever made my name sound that damn good.

“Wow,” he breathed, collapsing on the mattress next to me. “That was just, wow.” Brian chuckled, his hand burying itself into my tousled hair as he gently kissed my forehead.

“Mmm,” I moaned in response, curling into his chest that glistened with sweat.

“So, what’s your favorite color besides purple?”

I laughed loudly as did he. “You’re making small talk now?”

I felt Brian shrug. “We’re working backwards, oh well. Now what is it?”

“Uh, probably black, or aqua. Aqua’s really pretty, but black kicks ass. What about you?” I started to draw shapes into his chest.

Brian thought for a moment. “Black, definitely. I have a lot of black clothes and I wear black most of the time when I’m on stage.”

“On stage?” I frowned, sitting up to look at him.

“Yeah,” he nodded.

“Are you in a band?”

Again, Brian nodded. “Yeah, Avenged Sevenfold.”

“I saw you in concert!” I exclaimed, feeling slightly stupid that I hadn’t realized who he was. “When you guys were touring with Buckcherry and Papa Roach. I went for Papa Roach, but I really liked you guys too. That was actually the first time I ever heard you, and I loved it so I bought your CD and that DVD. Oh my god, I’m so stupid!” I exclaimed, hiding my face.

He just laughed. “No, it’s cool. At least now I know you won’t be using me for my money, since you had no idea who I was.”

“I’m sorry, Bri. I really am. I should have recognized you, I don’t know why I didn’t, since I couldn’t take my eyes off you when I was at the concert.”

“Oh really?” Brian smirked, his hand skimming down my side. I nodded, still embarrassed. “Well, I am flattered.”

“Why? There was thousands of girls staring at you that night. Fuck, my friend couldn’t take her eyes off you. I’m sure if she was a dude, she would have a had a boner.”

He shrugged. “I’m not sure, it makes me feel special for some reason. Probably because you’re kind of gorgeous.”

“Hardly!” I snorted, burying my face into his chest again. I felt weirdly safe; the heat radiating off his skin was comforting.

“Don’t you dare argue with me, missy!” Brian slapped my ass, making me squeak. “That was cute.” he grinned, pulling my face to his for a kiss.

“Oh shut up.” I rolled my eyes, pulling him on top of me.

“Round two!”
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PostSubject: Re: Closer [17+] Syn Gates   Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:44 pm

Hahaha! Wasn't this the one you wrote in your "Matt faze?" And then you turned it into a Brian story instead? XD
I love this one-shot, and it's not just because I'm in it!

I wanna love like
Johnny and June
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PostSubject: Re: Closer [17+] Syn Gates   Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:56 pm

Haha, yes it is! I had to change it though, I sounded like a horndog when I was describing Brian. XD
But thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: Closer [17+] Syn Gates   Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:22 pm

I love this one shot!

It has two deliciously hot guys in it...yummm!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Closer [17+] Syn Gates   Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:30 pm

Thank you! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Closer [17+] Syn Gates   Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:21 pm

Razz I remember reading this on Mibba!!! I am seriously jealous of your writing skills! This was amazing!!! (and really hott!) haha
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